Monday, November 22, 2021

Space Invaders

 So this was my work that I did with Mrs Krausse and we had t make a thing with this text.It hovered over me, shining in the moonlight. It’s round metallic frame barely visible in the night sky.Suddenly a bright light shot out of the bottom.The light shone all around me, making it hard to see.In an Instant I felt weightless, I was floating. This was so fun we had to describe this text so this is my image.





2 comments:

  1. Kia ora Jahnei, Ko Abbey taku ingoa, nō te kura o Tautoro ahau.

    I like the way you did your Google Drawing and described your image. You really inspired me with your work.

    Did you think about making earth on your Google Drawing?

    Next time, you could try to add planet Earth on your Drawing so you can inspire your readers.

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  2. Kia ora Jahnei my name is Hunter. I am a year 6 learner at Tautoro School. I really like how you used your own shapes on the ufo and the person. My most favourite part of the picture is the background. Kei te pai👍🏾

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